In Defence of Tolkien: a Rebuttal of China Miéville

Rockstar fantasy author and poster boy for the New Weird genre China Miéville attempts to slay the giant whose shoulders he stands on:

Tolkien is the wen on the arse of fantasy literature. His oeuvre is massive and contagious – you can’t ignore it, so don’t even try. The best you can do is consciously try to lance the boil. And there’s a lot to dislike – his cod-Wagnerian pomposity, his boys-own-adventure glorying in war, his small-minded and reactionary love for hierarchical status-quos, his belief in absolute morality that blurs moral and political complexity. Tolkien’s clichés – elves ‘n’ dwarfs ‘n’ magic rings – have spread like viruses. He wrote that the function of fantasy was ‘consolation’, thereby making it an article of policy that a fantasy writer should mollycoddle the reader.”

Oh my, where to start

Tolkien is the foundation of the genre in which Miéville writes, its bones. Tolkien is a pioneer of ‘second-world fantasy’ – where the setting is not earth, but a world of the writer’s own making. It’s difficult to overstate how influential he was – “you can’t ignore it, so don’t even try.” Fantasy previous to Lord of the Rings involved interactions between the real world and fantastical elements – ghosts, witches, fairies, genies. There are now thousands of ‘second worlds’,  from the Discworld to Westeros to Miéville’s own Bas-Lag. Can you imagine your bookshelf, or your childhood, without them? If anything, Tolkien is the arse on which Miéville is the boil (or the adorable freckle, if you happen to like his writing).

elves ‘n’ dwarves ‘n’ magic rings

Miéville maybe does not know which direction time flows in? Does he blame the 1819 writer of The Vampyre  for Twilight fanfiction, or Shakespeare for the decline of theatre?

Penny Arcade on Miéville

These fantasy clichés were original when Tolkien wrote them. Orcs and halflings were entirely created by Tolkien, and elves mostly so (they used to be small, shy woodland creatures, nothing like the tall melancholy things we have now). And it’s a bit much to blame him for the proliferation of magic rings, since they show up in the myths of every ringwearing culture throughout history.

boys-own-adventure glorying in war

“It was Sam’s first view of a battle of Men against Men, and he did not like it much. He was glad that he could not see the dead face. He wondered what the man’s name was and where he came from; and if he was really evil of heart, or what lies or threats had led him on the long march from his home; and if he would not really rather have stayed there in peace.”

Tolkien in 1916

Translation: ‘war is rad’, apparently? Look, Tolkien fought in World War 1 – he had no illusions about glory. Unless words like “hideous” and “misery” and “oh god, so many lice” seem glorious to you. All but one of his friends were dead by 1918. War in Lord of the Rings had irreparable consequences. The plains west of Mordor, on which the battle of Dagorlad was fought, was the bleakest place the hobbits had seen. Nothing would grow on that desecrated ground ever again. And remember, it wasn’t warriors that saved Middle-Earth  – the last alliance has no hope of victory, they are only buying time for Frodo. Frodo who refused to slay Gollum, who won’t even wear a sword towards the end, and who is so damaged by his experiences that he can never really be part of a happy life again.

fantasy as ‘consolation’

Oh, now, Miéville knows better than that. ‘Consolation’ is a far more complex word than just ‘hugs and puppies’. It’s a word with centuries of thought and theology behind it. The 6th Century philosopher Boethius – and 21st Century philosopher Alain de Botton – have both written books titled “Consolation[s] of Philosophy” and neither of them were intending to mollycoddle.

absolute morality that blurs moral and political complexity

‘How shall a man judge what to do in such times?’ ― ‘As he has ever judged,’ said Aragorn. ‘Good and ill have not changed since yesteryear; nor are they one thing among Elves and Dwarves and another among Men.’

It’s true that Tolkien is not a moral relativist. That’s easy for me to deal with because neither am I. I want to talk about ethics in fantasy in my next post, so I won’t go into it too much here, but I think it’s one of fantasy’s strengths that it’s one of the few places in literature where we can still talk about right and wrong in unambiguous terms. That said, every writer has a moral standpoint, even if that standpoint is relativism. It only becomes obnoxious when the good characters have no flaws, or their good actions never have bad consequences. That is not the case in Lord of the Rings:

  • Gollum is very close to redemption at some points in the book. Sam’s suspicion and unkindness are very likely what tip him over the edge to betrayal.
  • Frodo, of course, fails and succumbs to the ring’s power at the last.
  • Gandalf chooses not to slay Gollum out of mercy, and that turns out to be the saving of Middle-earth. Mercy compels him not to kill Saruman, and that causes enormous suffering in the Shire.
  • Aragorn told Éowyn not to go to battle. That decision was completely wrong. Luckily she disobeyed.
  • Both Boromir and Denethor commit terrible acts, but they are both considered good and noble people despite their failings.
  • “Nothing is evil in the beginning. Even Sauron was not so.”

In conclusion

The Miéville quote comes from a longer piece in which he tries to defend the fantasy genre by pointing out – rightly – that most of its detractors are referring solely to High or Epic Fantasy, while totally ignoring avant-garde subgenres such as New Weird, in which Miéville writes. But it’s one thing to distance himself from Tolkien’s fantasy – quite another to try and tear it down altogether. With apologies to Susanna Clarke:

It is the contention of Mr Miéville that everything belonging to Tolkien must be shaken out of modern fantasy, as one would shake moths and dust out of an old coat. What does he imagine he will have left? If you get rid of Tolkien you will be left holding the empty air.

Bonus Content: Boromir vs Faramir!

If you want to see where Tolkien’s values lay, compare the brothers Boromir and Faramir. Boromir tries to seize the Ring by force; he is killed and the hobbits are kidnapped as a result. Faramir is not tempted – he keeps his promise, “shows his quality” and aids Frodo and Sam on their journey.

So although Boromir is repeatedly referred to as the better warrior, the bolder, it is Faramir that Tolkien wants us to take for our moral example. Here’s what he has to say about war:

War must be, while we defend our lives against a destroyer who would devour all; but I do not love the bright sword for its sharpness, nor the arrow for its swiftness, nor the warrior for his glory. I love only that which they defend.”

 Of course, I’m talking about the book. In the movie he nearly succumbs. Peter Jackson threw away the message and the character for a cheap moment of suspense, something that angered Stephen Colbert as much as it did me.

Extra Super-Bonus Content: Dwarfs vs Dwarves!

‘Dwarves’ is the correct plural term when referring to the non-human race in Tolkien or other fantasy works. For human people with dwarfism, ‘dwarfs’ is grammatically correct, but it makes some folks unhappy, so why not say ‘people with dwarfism’? It is only two more words.

So what is even the point of the word ‘dwarfs’? For when you want a verb meaning ‘to make something appear small’ – e.g. ‘the new hotel in Dubai dwarfs the buildings around it.’ The more you know.

11 thoughts on “In Defence of Tolkien: a Rebuttal of China Miéville

  1. A rebuttal by Tolkien himself:
    “Some reviewers have called the whole thing simple-minded, just a plain fight between Good and Evil, with all the good just good, and the bad just bad. Pardonable, perhaps (though at least Boromir has been overlooked) in people in a hurry and with only a fragment to read and of course without the earlier-written but unpublished Elvish histories [The Silmarillion]. The Elves are not wholly good or in the right. Not so much because they had flirted with Sauron, as because with or without his assistance they were ’embalmers’. In their way the Men of Gondor were similar: a withering people whose only ‘hallows’ were their tombs. But in any case this is a tale about a war, and if war is allowed (at least as a topic and a setting) it is not much good complaining that all the people on one side are against those on the other. Not that I have made even this issue quite so simple: there are Saruman, and Denethor, and Boromir; and there are treacheries and strife even among the Orcs. [Besides], in this ‘mythology’ all the ‘angelic’ powers concerned with this world were capable of many degrees of error and failing, between the absolute Satanic rebellion and evil of Morgoth and his satellite Sauron, and the fainéance of some of the other higher powers or ‘gods’. The ‘wizards’ were not exempt. Indeed, being incarnate, they were more likely to stray, or err. Gandalf alone fully passes the tests, on a moral plane anyway (he makes mistakes of judgement).”

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  3. Good. I think the moral area is something where Tolkien-lovers and people of Moorcock and Mieville’s opinion will have to agree to disagree; I think there is room for both – the central problem between them is for instance Tolkien’s basic Christian viewpoint. Outside of this area you have demonstrated Mieville’s points to be highly problematic.

  4. I like reading Mieville, not so much GRRM or Moorcock. But despite his fantastic worlds and interesting characters, they all end the same way: with no point, little meaning, and me shrugging my shoulders. “Was that it?”

    So I’m glad you’re taking this whole moral relativism to task. It was all cute back in high school, but most of us have grown up since then. Having to daily face the moral quagmire of business life and pub nights and mainstream entertainment, it’s refreshing to find characters that are inspirational. That are something more than just the everyday bastards we have to deal with, and who aspire to be more. Like we all should.

    So yeah. Thanks for going against the popular tide! It’s a rare trait. 🙂

  5. Beautiful post. I found it absolutely ludicrous that Mieville has the audacity to blame Tolkien for similar works that have proceeded afterwards. Let’s we were all God fearing people, and God was the creator of all men. In this case, God made men and men made slaves. Do we blame God for slavery? Anyways, I also make the same argument on China’s pro-war statement, which in itself is an outrage. Michael Moorcock and China Mieville (who are both extremely talented writers in their own right) both ignorantly promulgate the same bull shit that Tolkien glorifies war likely because of post-Tolkien references like final battles and role playing games. However, many people seem to mistake him for glorifying something he despises, as you so excellently said.

    And for the whole mollycoddling crap that he’s rambling about, clearly he hasn’t taken into account the almost frequent melancholy that plagues the world of Middle Earth. As you said, the ingenious conception of Gollum, the world of men dwindling, the departing of Elves and thus the power of Valar waning. And by the end, sure it’s somewhat of a happy ending. But as you stated, there are damages that are still irreparable. The world of man has defeated evil but the world they once knew is world that doesn’t remain. Consolation my ass. And perhaps they never read The Children of Húrin, one of the greatest tragedies of mainstream fantasy or perhaps even read Beren and Lúthien and then say that Tolkien writes fantasy to coddle his reader, or blindly call him a false romantic.

    Once again, an excellent article. I also thank-you for that quote by Susanna Clarke (author of one of my favourites, Jonathan Strange & Mr. Norrell) who seems to be the only author to speak out against Mieville’s asinine comments. And I don’t say that without giving Mieville his due as well as Michael Moorcock. Both subversive and original purveyors of the genre. Personally, I think Mieville should place a little more enthusiasm in his stories than in his criticisms, at least then his contrivances will feel far more befitting.

  6. Oh whatever. Mieville’s worllds are brilliant fantasy because they go against all that. Mieville is criticising fantasty that is all that elves and magic bullshit as well as Tolkien who started it all. Every fantasy novel is all exactly the same apart from a rare few. Mieville creates new worlds and new people.
    This article may be really old but I don’t care, I just found it.

    And no I believe you’d blame Twilight for Twilight fanfiction. Haha the two worst things of ‘recent’ years, Twilight and fanfiction.

  7. There’s so, so much more to fantasy than just Tolkein, as much as I love epic fantasy. Fantasy has a rich, vibrant history, including secondary world building, from well before Tolkein came along. It would be hypocritical of me to continue this comment considering I haven’t actually read any of the works I would quote as yet, but here’s the review I came across on GoodReads that not only confirms Mieville’s view, but served as an eye opener for me.

    It doesn’t diminish my complete love of epic fantasy in any way, but it does make me crave for more, so much more, than regular genre fantasy delivers at the same time.

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